... No title.

Well... I'm pretty much bored right now. I was trying to watch my favorite movie, but I can't. I personally think The Uninvited is the best movie like out there... Doesn't really matter how many movies come out; nothing can ever top this one. Back to the point... IM BORED. I finished my homework, but I have nothing to do. I'm just here singing in my room listening to some music.... Not sure why... Although I love to sing, and by the way I really can... (Before someone asks.) I love singing.!

Yay... I made the basketball team today... I'm pretty much happy about it. I was kinda nervous going into like tryouts, and such but I guess I did pretty well. Now I get to order the pretty sweats, and stuff like that :) I had my face 2 face with Kauffman, and it was pretty interesting. We talked about colleges, careers, friends, and normal Kauffman things. Then I went to physical therapy today too... It was pretty fun... I learn some new exercises to help with my knees, and ankles.

My grades aren't really what I want them to be right now... Sadly, I have four B's.... Pretty disappointed with that. I guess that's just me. I'm hoping to get those B's up before the quarter ends, but I'm not sure if I'll have time... Let's see... I think I can play in the blue and silver game tuesday (since I'm on the team), but I'm not sure yet....

Well I'm off to watch The Uninvited.... Goodnight :)

Day Thirty

Today is the final blog... I'm almost sad to see that Project Cinderella is almost over, but I won't miss the blogging AT ALL. It was pretty fun at times, but it's not something I would want to do on a regular basis. I think after this I might just stop blogging, or maybe if I'm inspired I'll blog about something. I love writing, so this was definitely one of the easier aspects of writing. It was really helpful that we had a prompt to write about too because without out that I don't think I would've wanted to do it, but surprisingly I made it do day thirty! I'm proud of myself...

Honestly, I never thought I was good at blogging so I detested it for awhile; well I still do. I just have a different reason for it now; don't get me wrong... I enjoy writing, but sometimes it can be very time consuming! Well... I guess that's pretty much enough about the blogging, and things of that nature.... Again, it was good, but I'm really glad it's over for the time being because I'm starting to get a lot of homework from other teachers :/

What's left now? Let's discuss the book... Shall we? I'm pretty much done with the writing, but I might do some editing; maybe add or change some things. I'm not sure yet... I'm in a good place though, and the pictures are the only thing on my mind right now. I might draw them today! How exciting? Well... Not really, but it's apart of the book.... Yay for the book :)

Well... Here's to another short blog from me :) I'm surprised I didn't write more... But here's to the last blog.

Enjoy :)

Day Twenty-Nine

I've actually learned a lot from doing Project Cinderella; it has taught that even though I don't like kids, but I can still write a decent book for them. It makes me think that maybe one day I could write a book, and get it published (of course it would be for the grown ups though, sorry kids!) I've actually rediscovered my love for writing short stories, and things of that nature. I've also noticed that I write pretty detailed; sometimes I'm too detailed about things, which isn't always a good thing. That's always been one of my weaknesses; I like everything to be logical, and sound correct all the time.

I don't think it's a bad thing though, but I guess I'll have to work on that. My strengths would definitely be the writing, and blogging because things like this just come naturally to me. I enjoy reading, and writing a lot; it's one of my favorite past times. I've actually come pretty far in this process although normally I was pretty much on top of things from the start, and I'm done with all the writing of the book. Now, I'm starting on the illustrations; I really don't feel like drawing them... Maybe I could get someone to draw the pictures for me :) Any volunteers?

I didn't really like commenting on other people's blog, but it was something I had to do to get my grade. I liked all the comments I got although they were none with anything bad to say... Well not bad, but a way to reconstruct my drawings. I'm guessing that meant I'm doing a great job! I've done a some research about the Philippines, and found some interesting things. I'm actually intrigued about the Philippines, and look forward to visiting one day :) I hope that the children will like my book, and actually enjoy listening to it. I think I've pretty much accomplished everything I wanted to in this project.

I'm not sure about my weaknesses, and strengths... Well... Let's see. I'm a good writer, and it comes natural to me. I had trouble writing a child's level of thinking though, but I've adapted a little better than I thought I would've. I might struggle with drawing the pictures at the beginning, but it'll come eventually. I was pretty punctual with the blogs, and things. I exuded a good use of time management skills, and helping people. Not to sound like arrogant or anything, but I can't really find many weaknesses on this project. Well... I guess doing the presentations were hard for since I'm shy, and all. In the end, I believe I've doing pretty well at this point :)

Enjoy!

Day Twenty-Eight

I've been thinking about the dedication for the book for awhile now, and I think I know who I'm going to dedicate it to. Dedicating a book to someone is one of the most important things about writing a book right? Writing a book just screams... Dedicate it to someone right? :) Well... I have some people in mind; maybe my mom, or my brother, even my father. I could dedicate it to MY kids, but I don't have any! I wanted to stay away from dedicating it to my immediate family members because everyone does that. The person I chose is still in my family, but they mean a lot more to me. (Still love the family though... No hard feelings.)

It's important to acknowledge those who help you life because without them; you could make it anywhere. Having inspirational people in life isn't always guaranteed, but when you find someone like that; you should show respect to them. I know I'm rambling about who to dedicate the book to, but it was actually a pretty easy decision once I thought about it. I've had help from my mom, and my brother, and even his girlfriend on writing my book, but it's something they usually do; which means that I'm happy they helped. I don't think it's worth dedicating a book to them though because they help me no matter what.

Back to the point though... I'm dedicating my book to Michael, and no not the Michael in our class. I'm talking about my Uncle Michael, who died back in 2001. Is it weird that I'm dedicating my book to a deceased loved one? My reasoning is because he was always there for me, and we were really close back in the day. It's been almost 9 or so years since he's been gone, but I've never really gotten over it. I don't want it seem like I'm too emotional about this because it's just a children's book, but he was always my inspiration. I mean he wasn't killed or anything; he just had heart failure I believe. He was the one that everyone wanted to be like, and hang out with; he was always wanted around. I guess I'm really just dedicating it to him because he was my biggest role model, and he was an aspiring artist too. I figured why not dedicate the book to another artist, so there's why I'm dedicating it to him. I might make a little side-note dedication to the readers (kids) because they're important too.

Just to make things clear... I'm dedicating it to my Uncle, and I didn't mean to make this blog seem so sad; it just came out that way I guess. Don't get like emotional or anything please... It wasn't intended for it, but if you didn't... Disregard this message :)

Forgot to mention... A special dedication for the class.

Hmm... I'm guessing that's all for today's blog. Enjoy!

Day Twenty-Seven

First off... Happy Birthday to Me :) I'm Finally 16.!

I've been dreading this blog for the longest, but I knew it was coming eventually. I haven't been able to come up with a title at all. The original story's title was The Mirror of Matsuyama. That title fit the story because it's about a special that was brought back to the Mother before her death, and became a sentimental object to the little daughter. It seems like the perfect thing for the story, but I never figured out why it was the "of Matsuyama" because it was never mentioned in the folktale. It provides a mystery to the story; I'm assuming, or something of that nature.

The title can't be that long, or else it'll be over dramatic... I think I'll try, and keep it as short as possible. Coming up with a good title is going to be hard, and difficult. It's going to be manageable though, but coming up with five is quite... I'm not sure yet. I've only come up with one so far. I planned on mimicking the original title, and changing the words to fit the Philippines. Get it? Now I'm going to list the titles, and give their importances (significances.) I think I want the boxing gloves included in the title, or maybe not (And no there's no obsession with boxing gloves... Jarelle :) Just thought I'd put that in there.)

Possible Titles:

• The Boxing Gloves from the Philippines...
•  Benjie...
• Overcoming Circumstances...
• Twelve rounds... (Since it has something to do with Boxing; I figured it could work.)
• Getting in the ring with destiny!

I think my titles are pretty somewhat decent, but none of which I really like... I'm thinking of going with the first, or second title. I chose the first one because it goes with the original story, and I didn't want to change too much of the story. I think that title fits the story right? Choosing Benjie for a title was somewhat of a given thing because he's the main character, and it just seems cool to give reference to his name. I think that might be the title for the book, let's see what happens though.

The last 3 titles were pretty much random, but still have meanings. "Overcoming circumstances" is one of the themes of the story, and I think it would be a good title to use. There were a lot of circumstances that had to be overcame by the characters in the story. Using that for a title would be put a good inference on that factor. "Twelve rounds" came from the simple fact that there's boxing in my story... I think you get the point of it, so there's no explanation needed. 

I really like the last title "Getting in the ring with destiny" because it incorporates boxing with the family issues, and what he was destined to overcome in the story... It fits the story without giving too much away, but it keeps the kids tuned in to the story. I'm considering the first, second, and fifth title... Let me know what you think about the titles... Give some input on it also! I think was one of the weirdest blogs... It feels weird doing work on my birthday :/ Anyway... That's all.

Enjoy!

Day Twenty-Six

In this blog it appears that we have free reign... I'm not sure if that's a good thing for me because I like to write A LOT. The only problem is I'm not really sure what to write about in the blog... Let's see. My story is coming along pretty well; although I should probably start writing it again. I think it's a good start for right now, but does anybody know when the final draft is due? I guess that isn't a valid question since nobody would know anyway... But you can't blame for me asking right? I'm actually enjoying the writing the process, and the things that come with writing the book. Doing this assignment really got me thinking about writing an actual book to be published for the world to read... Do you think I could do it?

I'm not sure what else to write about... It's day 26, and it feels weird because project Cinderella is almost over! It's been a long going process of each blog. I think I've done a good job of writing each blog, and gave each aspect of my story to the best of my abilities. Coming up with the names would probably be the second hardest thing, and I know I'm going to have a tough time with the title... Possibly. I'm not sure, but that's the next blog for today I believe. I think this a good place to stop with this blog because I'm not feeling very creative right now because it's early in the morning, and I'm tired. I was trying to enjoy my birthday today, but oh well... I saw the two blogs, and got kind of angry.

Despite that, I've enjoyed doing the blogs... I was actually surprised to see that I kept up with doing the blogs on time, and was never really late on doing one. That makes me proud, and my grade reflects that... Well this is pretty much the blog for today. It was designed to keep you posted on my writing process. Enjoy! To sum things up... My story is coming along, and it's almost ready to be published. The only things left to do is the title, and finish up the writing. Again... Enjoy!

I think I did this blog right... Tell me if I did... :)

Day Twenty-Five

I actually enjoyed reading my manuscript, and it was pretty fun to do. It felt weird to read through something that I had written myself, but I liked it. I'm usually not a fan of wanting to read my own work because I never think it's good enough. It's always good when I'm writing it, but when I read it; it just doesn't seem to sound right. It's not that I'm like conceited or anything, but I would think I'm a perfectionist. I'm really hard on myself sometimes even when it's good, and people say that. I can't accept the compliments sometimes... Weird right? Back to the point... I think they was great flow to the story, but there were some minor problems (setbacks.)

I believe that the book I'm writing is too detailed; which isn't bad, but it's too grown up for the kids. Then I think they aren't little kids, but they're in the fourth grade. I think they're able to comprehend such word uses, and other things that will be used in my book. Maybe simplifying some things in the book will be a good idea, but that's what editing is for right? Eventually I'll get to that part... For the most part, the place I'm at seems to be a good spot to start at. I was actually surprised to hear my voice when I read... If you know me then you know that I'm not much of a talker, but when I read something; I think I sound very articulate, and professional. I think I want to do like the whole voice changes for the characters, but I'm not sure yet; it would add a good thing to the book though!

Reiterating, the flow was pretty good for where I'm at; it could be better though. I'm not sure too sure on what the style would be, but I think it's my style type of writing (If I can say that?) I'm typically a good writer, and it comes easy for me. I'm definitely proud of myself for writing this; doing so well with the blogs, and writing the book. Putting the book in more simpler terms is my next step, or maybe I should leave it like it is... Leaves some things to be thought about. Overall... I like the work so far, but I need to put some changes into action :)

Enjoy!

Day Twenty-Four

This blog seems pretty easy to write... I'm happy about that after the blog yesterday, which was pretty tough. Back to the point though, my climax is pretty self explanatory all  in itself. I think we're supposed to use the list of the things Prier gave us, and tell which climaxes fit our stories. I just found out that my story really fits most of the criterion on his list. I was actually surprised to see that... Now let's list out all the climaxes of my story, then I'll give an explanation for each.

Climaxes for my story:

1. Greatest challenges met or failed.
2. Personal problems overcome by character's own efforts.
3. Bad influences outfaced.
4. Unpopular or unusual hunches or ideas proved correct or incorrect.
5. Relationships made or mended or finally discarded.
6. An apparent weakness turns out to be a strength, or vice versa.

It's almost impossible to say that a story could have so many climax possibilities right? Well... I guess my story is pretty much different then, now let's get to those explanations. The "greatest challenges met or failed" fits in my story because the whole point of the story is bring people together. The challenges were  bonding the males in the story, and bringing the family together. Eventually those things happened, but they occurred very slowly. "Personal problems over by character's own efforts", this fits because Benjie goes through a lot of personal problems to find out who is, and who he wants to be. He is able to get over his insecurities, and build a relationship with his father, and soon after his stepfather.

The third, and the fourth climaxes fit my story; they are similar, so they are going to be explained together. Benjie is able to get over the somewhat bad influence of Andres, and they are able to build a somewhat decent relationship. This won't be displayed much in the book, but it's something you should know! The thing about the "unpopular or unusual hunches or ideas proved correct or incorrect" is also a huge factor in my story. Andres comes in, and gets the notions that Benjie is attempting his life. This isn't at all true, and his assumptions will be put to rest after Angel, and Benjie talks about his reasons for boxing. It almost makes the whole Andres thing seems pointless, and a waste of time. But that's another issue to determine!

"Relationships made or mended or finally discarded", I would have to say that this is the BIGGEST CLIMAX OF MY STORY. My whole book is focused on the relationships of the family, but specifically the relationship of Benjie, and Ramon (father, and son.) I think I've clearly focused on the relationships a lot, and I think you get the point of that right? Enough of the relationships... The last climax to discuss is "an apparent weakness turns out to be a strength, or vice versa." This is important because their lack thereof (which is relationships.... respect... all things basically.) I'm not sure exactly how to explain it at this point, but it's key to something in my story. I just haven't figured that out yet.

The climax of my story will be when Ramon dies... I think that's a good point for the suspension to build up, and the story will change from that point on. I'm not sure... I think it can't be when Angel leaves because it's too soon in the story, and enough suspension hasn't been built up. Definitely... The climax will be when Ramon dies, and Andres is introduced into the picture. I like that point in the story... I think I've said that before... Now I think I'm just rambling! Well... Let's get it straight before the blog ends. The climaxes that fit my story are listed above, and my climax is when Ramon (the father) dies, and he takes up boxing for personal reasons..... To add to that, another factor of the climax will be the introduction of Andres. I think that's it for this blog. I've identified the climaxes, and my own personal climax!

That's pretty much it... Climaxes... Climaxes... Climaxes... Enjoy! Below I've placed a picture... See if you can guess why. I'm assuming it's an old movie, or something. Can you guess why I've included it on this blog? It's easy to figure it out... Again... Enjoy :)

Day Twenty-Three

I must agree with everyone, this blog is definitely the toughest one yet. I'm really not too sure on what Prier meant by the social responsibilities. I think I get it, but at the same time I don't. Make sense? I'm actually pretty confused on what to do really, but I'll try to understand so I can write the blog. Well now that I've read it over, and over again; I think I get it. Social responsibilities are very important to a children's story.

Each character will have their own social responsibilities, but the characters will also share same of the same. Let's break this down by characters... Shall we? The main character is Benjie of course; his social responsibilities will be "Obeying his parents", and "Keeping up good grades, and being active." I think those are things that kids should know about because listening to your parents is just the right thing to do. Getting good grades, and being active is also important because it just seems important right? Saying all this, I think I could tie "Always do the right thing, no matter what" into this because it seems like that's what Benjie tries to do. I'm going to convey these responsibilities by the way Benjie acts, and treats the people around him. His overall attitude, and demeanor will do the talking for him!

Next character up... Ramon (The father), his social responsibilities include being a good parent, and an understanding father. His role in the book is to set an example of how fathers should be, and how they should nurture their children. I think his responsibilities tie into Benjie's responsibilities because their relationship will be on display most of the time. I'm using their relationship to show Ramon's social responsibilities in being that good father figure (even though technically... He's the actual father.)

Next... Next character up... Angel (The mother), her only true social responsibility is her tremendous work ethnic. She is dedicated to her job, and she does it well... A mothering skills may need work at times, but despite her glitches; she's a wonderful mother. Andres... Andres (The stepfather), I'm not really sure what his social responsibilities will be. He's just an antagonist character for the most part, so I don't think he has real responsibilities. I guess I'll have to think of his sooner, or later. 

To make things easier.. Here's a list of all the social responsibilities.

Responsibilities:

1. "Obeying parents, or any elders in life."
2. "Doing what is right no matter what, or who is watching."
3. "Being active... Just because."
4. "Having a good work ethic can get you places a lot faster..."
5. "Perseverance is the key to success."

I think that pretty much sums up the blog for today... Let me know if I did it right. I'm not entirely sure. Enjoy!

Day Twenty-Two

The theme of my story is somewhat complex to explain, but not really when you think about it... It's a theme that you would have to think about to really get it. The theme is "Keeping faith in family no matter what", and "Family is the most important thing." I think those are good themes to use in the story because it's something kids need to learn about; wouldn't you agree?

Events in the Story:

• Angel goes on the trip to the states; forcing Ramon, and Benjie to bond.
• The trips get extended for more time.
• Benjie begins boxing training with his father... (The bond shared between the two.)
• Ramon passes down his legacy to Benjie (in the form of boxing gloves, and his life knowledge.)
• Ramon dies, and Andres comes into the picture. 
• The family (Angel, Benjie, and Andres) being able to overcome the obstacles, and become happy again!

I think the main focus to silently interject the theme into the book is by showing the relationship between Ramon, and Benjie growing each day. I think should be a big factor in showing off my main points, and themes. I don't really think I could explain it any better than I have on this blog, but I'm definitely going to shift more of the focus on the relationships within the family; also the family as a whole. If this blog wasn't helpful... Feel free to go back to my day thirteen, and read from there because I might have explained things a little better on there. I think another moral/message/theme could be, "You never know what you have until it's gone." That was one of the lessons Benjie had to learn the hard way... Continue to read my blogs, and my book (when it's done) to find out why!

That's all for now... I've posted a link to my day thirteen below if things aren't really clear to you on this blog. I personally think I explained things a lot better on day thirteen, but it's up to you if you want to read it again. Remember, the choice is yours.... May the force be with you! Enjoy :)

Day Thirteen

Day Twenty-One

Opening lines.... Opening lines... I knew this would come up sooner or later, but I really haven't given much thought to it. I know what I want to say, but I'm not sure how to say it. Make sense? I don't want anything too dramatic to open with because the beginning of the book is going to be something more happier, and something to reel the readers in. The only problem is I'm afraid the happy opening will come off as a little too cheesy; I get it's for fourth graders, but some things are just too cheesy for them right? In retrospect, I've read a lot of books that has those cheesy beginnings that just made me want to put the book down, and never pick it up again. I definitely don't want my book to start off like that.

I'm not too sure on what the first line will be, but believe the picture will be absolutely great. I'm thinking the first picture should be something family oriented, or maybe just a glimpse of those magnificent boxing gloves I've been raving about for so long. Again, this will be decided when I come up with the opening line; this shouldn't be so hard! I've been flipping through very books hoping to get some inspiration for my opening line, but sadly I haven't found any. I would go with the "once upon a time" thing, but that's so unoriginal by now... I think almost everyone is using that line. Leaving me to think of another alternative, but what exactly could be used?

I'm seriously considering using a one a word opening line like "Family", or something like "One word... Boxing, the only thing that could bring a family back together after unexpected tragedy struck." I think that's a good start to a great opening line, but I'm not entirely sure yet. "Benjie punched the bag with all his might; as he tried to forget about all his troubles, and remember the happier times in his life..." I think that's the happiest opening line I've come up with thus far. Now that I've come up with some concise opening lines; I'm definitely seeing the first picture being boxing gloves, and a punching bag. Something close to that nature, just to set the scene.

I think those are good opening lines because they foreshadow events to come, and they just sound good for an opening line right? Personally, I think so... I'm not too sure though, but it's not too shabby for a opening line. These lines provide some sense of mystery, yet it alludes to the things to come; just like I mentioned before. Well... I think that's pretty much it for this blog. Let me know what you think of my opening lines, I'm open to all suggestions :)

Day Twenty

I'm glad this blog came up... I haven't actually been thinking about my pictures much yet, but it's good that it came up right? I think so, and now it's time to discuss these illustrations. Drawing comes rather easy to me, but some days it's pretty tough to do. I'm not entirely sure why, but I really want to use stick figures for pictures because I don't feel like drawing things :) Maybe that sounds too lazy though; I'll probably end up drawing them, or finding someone who would draw them for me.

Using paint for the pictures seems to be harder than you'd think, so I might end up using the adobe photoshop. This hasn't been decided either, but I'll have to make that choice soon! I consider myself to be a pretty decent drawer, so I'm thinking these illustrations will be no problem.... I know that much already. I'm not really sure what else to say on this blog, but let me think about it for a minute.... Now let's discuss the pictures I'll be using in my tikatok book.

In my book, there will be boxing gloves of course since that is one of the most important things in my story. I'm going to include a lot of pictures of the families, the family members as individuals, and also a picture of the house. Most of the emphasis of the drawings will go to the development of how each character looks because they are the most important aspects of the story. The pictures in my story will represent the words, and will serve as the visual auditory of them... If that makes any sense? I can't just pinpoint 15 exact pictures right now because I'm not even sure which pictures I'm going to use yet, but I do know some basic elements to include (which were mentioned before.) If you want to get a general idea of some of the pictures then go back, and look at my previous blogs to see some of the pictures that will be included... If not then just wait, and see them in the book :)

I think that's pretty much it for this blog today... Enjoy!

Day Nineteen

I'm not really sure what I'm missing from my cultural pastiche... I thought I was doing a pretty good job with all the blogs, and whatnots. Apparently everyone else did too, but that's not the point I'm trying to make is it? I'm pretty sure that I want my pastiche to be almost similar to the original because I'm not changing the entire thing, but I'm only adding different aspects. I'm only changing certain things that need to be changed in order to make my story truly MINE.

I think I've discussed some things I wanted to change in the story in previous blogs, and I think I explained those extensively enough for a good start. This blog is really hard for me to think about, and write things that I haven't covered. I'm pretty sure I've covered most things I need for a good enough start, but I could probably do more research on the languages; such things like that. There is some research needed to be done, but I'm just not sure what is needed.

I'm planning to make this story pretty emotional, and dramatic. I think that's something I need to work out; like how dramatic to make it, and how deep I want to go with the message. Fourth graders can take a lot, but I think I'm trying to be too deep with my ideas. Other than these things... I'm not really sure what I'm missing for my story... If you have any ideas, then let me know please!

I think this is the shortest blogs I've done thus far :)

Day Eighteen

WARNING: This blog is extremely long... So Enjoy reading IT ALL :)
I'm rewriting my story in the Philippines culture, which means that I had to find three other folktales written in that culture as well. It seems easy enough to do that, and it turns out that I was right. I think the only problem I would have is to find relative morals, and messages between the three. As I do this assignment I must mention that the folktales have weird names, and are pretty different than the usual ones you hear about.

How the First Head Was Taken

Author: No known author, but there are ties the Igorot, which consists of six ethno-linguistic tribes in the Philippines. 

"How the First Head Was Taken" is about the Moon cutting off the Sun's son's head, if that makes sense. Let me explain... In the story the Moon (who was a woman named Kabigat) was making a large copper pot, and took great pride in it. She also put a beautiful stone on the side of the pot, and she molded it together beautifully. Cal-Chal was the Sun's son in the story, and he became very interested in watching the Moon make this pot; the son watched for a very long time. Kabigat noticed that Cal-Chal watching, and she cut his head off with her paddle because she didn't want anyone watching her. The Sun soon came, and put  its son's head on; which saved his life. In the end... The Sun ending up saying this to the Moon: "You cut off my son's head, and because you did this, ever after on the earth people will cut off each others head." 

The Boy Who Became a Stone

Author: The Tinguian (which are indigenous people from the mountainous province of Abra in Luzon, Philippines.

"The Boy Who Became a Stone" is actually a pretty sad story, the boy is building some type of snare for a bird. The bird is almost taunting him by telling him to come, and catch it (tik-tik-lo-den.) The boy's name is Elonen, and plays throws the snare over the bird, and then finally catches it; he puts it in a jar in his room. He left to go play, and came home to see that his grandmother had eaten it; it made him pretty sad. Elonen traveled to the forest to the big stone, and wishes to be eaten by it; his wish comes true. He's turned into stone for the rest of his life, but his grandmother comes to look for him anyway because he never returned home. She tried everything to break the stone; she used horses, carabaos, chickens, but nothing was successful. In the end, she had to return home without her grandson... Pretty sad right?

The Carabao and the Shell

Author: The Tinguian (which are indigenous people from the mountainous province of Abra in Luzon, Philippines.

"The Carabao and the Shell" is like the hare, and the tortoise race. Except in this story nobody really wins ultimately, and the story goes like this... The Carabao went for a drink, and began chatting with a shell; he called the shell slow as well as other things I'm sure. The Shell answered back by saying that it could beat the Carabao in a race, and indeed they raced. The Carabao believed that it was winning the race the entire time, but in fact the shell never moved AT ALL. As the Carabao progressed up the road; he was always call out "Shell", and another shell would answer him. It almost surprised the Carabao that the shell could keep up, but it was all him the entire time. Eventually this kept going on until the Carabao itself to death literally!

These three stories all have meanings all on their own, and they all possess good messages; which could be difficult to determine. I'm not sure that the first folktale had a real message, but it makes a direct reference to the world of today; it refers to cutting off people's head. That's what we do today right? In all the wars; we are killing, and decimating each other over pointless reasons. I think the first folktale goes back to the days of Confucius, or even back to the Bible for that matter... Remember the "eye for an eye, or a tooth for a tooth rule." Those rules apply to that first story..  

I'm not really sure what the second folktale's message is because it just talks about a grandmother that eats her grandson's bird. Then, he goes to make a wish to be eaten by the big stone. I would say the message is don't take advantage of people because you'll miss them when they're gone. I'm not sure how that really goes with the story, but it seems like a great message right? I don't think there's a clear message in this folktale...

As I've mentioned previously, the third folktale is similar to Hare and the Tortoise. Except this story results in death, and it's quite ridiculous to begin with. I would say that the message here would have to be "Don't be too cocky, or arrogant." I found a quote that says "Self-confidence is the memory of success", which I think this could apply to the story because somehow the Carabao thought it was just that great that it could beat the Shell in a race. 

I also found another great quote would be "Swallow you pride occasionally, it's non-fattening!" That's a great quote as well too because the shell had the silent confidence, while the Carabao was being arrogant for no reason. I don't think my stories focus on one aspect, but they all focus on various aspects that people need in life. Each of these stories has their own purpose as it was mentioned before, and they all serve that purpose to the fullest. 

The Tinguian... Looking pretty cool right? :)

Philippines Folktales

Tinguian

Igorot

Day Seventeen

The original story has no author, but it's an oral tradition in Japan. Since I couldn't find a definite author for my story; I had to go back to one of the websites I used prior to beginning these blogs. I found another story that was a also a Japanese oral tradition from the same source as my original one. The story I chose to read, and use for comparisons is called The Mirror of Matsuyama. I know without reading it, it sounds really similar to my story; since I picked it out in the first place. I also found another story that was from the Japanese culture, but had no similarities to the original story. It's called A Woman and the Bell of Miidera, and it ends up turning into a very interesting story. I won't tell too much about it, but the woman is very interested with the bell. The Priests believe a woman's touch will harm the bell, and in fact it's true. The woman ends up touching the bell anyway, and destroys the bel.

The Mirror of Matsuyama consists of three main characters at the beginning; the Mother, the Father, and the Daughter. They live in a province of Echigo in Japan, and they are very content with their lives. Soon after, the Father leaves to go on a trip to the Capital for business. He is very excited, but there was also some sadness in the family as well. Before the Father leaves; he makes the Daughter promise to take care of the house, and her Mother. If she keeps her promise... There would be a gift in return for her! It was a sad day as the Father left his family, but it was something he had to do. I assume the Wife had been getting sick between that time, and when the Father returned; he gave gifts as he had promised. The Daughter received a doll, and the Mother a mirror; she wasn't sure of what is what because they had never owned anything with such beauty.

Soon after, the Mother died; the Daughter took the mirror for herself. The Father also remarried, and the Step-Mother somehow got the assumption that the Daughter was making attempts on her life. This wasn't true at all, and the Father confronted the Daughter; she told the truth. Explaining the importance of the mirror; the Father began to feel guilty for all his false accusations. After the truth came out, the family was repaired; they lived happily every after. The end! Such a beautiful story right? It almost brings tears to your eyes....

I think this story is almost too similar to my story, but I made some changes that should help differentiate the two. I've changed the gender roles in my story, the main character is a boy now! My story still follows the same basic story line, but I've changed a lot of things. Instead of a mirror, I'm using boxing gloves in which the Father (Ramon) gives to his son (Benjie.) The trip taken by the Father will now be taken by the Mother (Angel), and it's been extended for a longer period of time. The gifts were only given to Benjie as his father's last testament of his undying love. Angel remarries as in the original the Father remarries, and she marries a man outside of her faith (well she really doesn't have one.) In the end, the family does end up having a happy every after type story!

In my version of the story... I'm going to exaggerate the drama a lot more; I know this is a children's book, but suspense is good for everyone! If you plan on reading my story; come prepared with a box of tissues, and some popcorn to enjoy the show because you will be taken an emotional roller coaster literally. I'm playing on the emotions with this story, hopefully I can pull it off like I envisioned. I can't wait to start writing on Monday... Until then, enjoy the weekend :) I forget to mention that both stories have the same morals, but mine are a little less strict (which will be explained later... Well or just put into the book.) I've also posted the link to my story if you would like to read it... It's actually a great story. So read it, and again enjoy the weekend :)

The Mirror of Matsuyama

Day Sixteen

Dialogue... Talking... Conversations... All these things have the basic same meaning, all are important in a good story. My story will consists of a lot of dialogue between the various characters, but also there will be a lot of inner thoughts coming out (if that makes sense.) When I say that; I mean like the in the movies where characters are thinking something, but its in their head but the audience can hear it too. I believe it's called a soliloquy, and I would like to use that in my story. It would make a more dramatic effect on the story don't you think? As I mentioned before... I'm really going for that emotional story that'll bring tears to eyes! I've finally picked names for my characters too, and I think they flow pretty well together... I only used one name I originally found, but I chose all new names for the other characters.

Benjie (The Son)
Since he is a junior in high school... His voice will be kind of deep (like most 17 year olds that have been through puberty.) I don't mean the scary deep voice, but the voice of a matured young man. I plan on making him one of those really cool, but really quiet guys. Picture the voice of James Earl Jones mixed with... A regular Filipino teen. He's very articulate in his speech, but chooses not to speak all the time.

Ramon (The Father)
The Father is in his early 40s; which means he isn't young anymore, but he isn't too old either. His voice was be... Like a normal middle aged man I presume. Since he's just in between those ages; his voice will be in between also. Picture Enrique Iglesias mixed with Julio Iglesias (Not the faces); only the voices. I think he voice will be a mixture of their voices, or something like that. I'm certain it would like a middle aged man! His voice will powerful, and commanding; yet calm in every way.

Angel (The Mother)
The Mother has an ironic name because she's the furthest thing from an angel, but she isn't that bad of a person. She is in her late 30s also. I think at the beginning she will have a very annoying, sarcastic voice; but toward the end it grows into a more blissful, serene voice. It's less annoying at the end, and she should be more tolerable for everyone. Picture.... Joan Rivers for the beginning of the story (really hilarious), but transforming into more into a prominent filipino woman... Say Cheryl Burke, or any other filipino woman that could be thought of?

Andres (The Step-Father)
I never gave him a name in the beginning, but this is his name. It's spanish for "manly", and I chose that because it fits his persona. Since he will be a manly man; his voice will be scratchy, rugged, raspy, and just overall scruffy. It will almost scare someone when he speaks because of his rude tone. He is obnoxious, and totally ruthless. Picture that Allstate guy Dennis Haysbert with the super extra deep raspy voice, mixing with... Say Brad Garrett, and Vin Diesel. Pretty deep, and raspy right? That's the voice I'm going for!

Weather Discussion Dialogue:
This dialogue will consist of tagaloglang, and english. (Cebuano will soon be added in place of tagaloglang, or just added in the mix)

Benjie- "Magandang umaga Mother."
Angel- "Sandali Lang... What do you want?"
Benjie- "I'm curious to know about the weather tomorrow, will it be as sunny as today?"
Angel- "Ewan ko, can't you see I'm busy Benjie... I'm trying to get ready for work!"
Benjie- (Voice trails off as he says this) "Paumanhin.... I'll just go ask dad."
(Leaves room to find his father...)
Ramon- "Hoy Benjie, kamusta?
Benjie- "Mabuti father, mabuti... Could you tell me what the weather will be like tomorrow?"
Ramon- "I think it will be sunny just like every other day here, shall we go to the beach tomorrow?
Benjie- "Oo... Salamat, mamaya!"
Ramon- "Mamaya!"
(Benjie exits the room, leaving to catch his mother)
Angel- "Did your father tell you about the weather report?"
Benjie- "Oo... He told me that we were going to the beach tomorrow too!"
Angel- "Sounds fun, Benjie."
Benjie- "I don't see why you couldn't just tell me that... It was just a simple question ANGEL."
Angel- "ANO ANG PANGALAN MO..... ANO ANG PANGALAN MO?"
Benjie- "Paumanhin mother... I just wanted to know the weather, and you got angry!"
Angel- "Well you're talking about nonsense... Who cares about the weather?"
Benjie- "Whatever, I'm leaving... Mamaya!"
SCENE.

I think using these various languages make the story sound a lot better because it makes it more exciting. The conversation seemed to have flowed pretty smoothly right? I purposely wrote in another language to throw the reader off, so I could keep my story secretive. I'll leave the translating of the story to you to see what you can come up with on your own! Good luck on the translations... Just to point out, the conversation above is foreshadowing things, so pay close attention. It shows another side of Benjie that won't be shown much in the story!

Tagaloglang

Day Fifteen

I'm not a fan of public speaking on any standards, but I had to make an exception for the assignment. I though I did pretty well though despite my nervous, and somewhat shaky voice. Overall, I would say that the presentation went well; despite those nervous glitches. I didn't think they were noticeable until someone told that my voice was shaky, but I guess nobody else noticed.

Making the video was pretty frustrating at times because it would never let me edit anything, and I had to remake the video more than I would have liked to. There was also trouble picking a song for the video because I didn't really like music selection. I ended up choosing an electronica song, which I thought went great with my presentation. 

As I've mentioned before.. I absolutely detest public speaking, but I think I pulled through; doing a good job. Another frustration was getting the computer to act right so I could present in the first place. I kept forgetting which thing went where, and I thought it was funny though. To be honest, I thought my presentation would horribly WRONG in the ways possible... I guess that wasn't the case. 

I'm actually glad I got up there, and did the presentation successfully! There were some things I would've love to change about the presentation, but I'm happy with the outcome. I think the video came out great though because I added words, and slides that helped it flow together better :) I'm glad that other people are getting to comment on it, and give me feedback on the presentation and blogs.

I loved the idea of the video, but again I wasn't a fan of the presentation. Well that's all for now! 

Day Fourteen

List of Events in Chronological Order:
I'm not entirely sure how long the story will be, but it's going to take longer than your average story. I think the time will play an important factor in whole story because it gives the whole flow to the story. Before the story begins... There will be a brief introduction of each character of their role in this story... Like age, behavior, and such things.

• The story takes place over a period of about 2 to 3 years; more than likely it'll be about 3 years long just for dramatic effect.
• The family has the bonding period for the first year. (Just to build up the story, dramatic effects, rising action, things like that)
• The Mother makes preparations to leave on the trip for about 3 weeks.
• The trips is extended for a total of 6 months.
• The Father begins to get sick right around the time the Mother leaves. (Around that 6 month period)
• Now, 18 months left to fill..
• The Father starts reminiscing about the old days of when he used to box... For about 2 months.
• The ill Father discovers his son's secret passion for boxing. (1 month period)
• Father, and Son began their own intimate bonding discussing boxing, and life in general; things of that nature. This occurs for the next 2 months.
• The Father becomes deathly ill; although he is training his son on boxing (which started in the previous months- right above) The Mother also returns, but she is up to date on the situation because they have all been communicating on the subject, but she couldn't return in time. This occurs for roughly a month. In this same month; the Mother returns, sadly to see that the Father has died. Well that seems too harsh, I'll let the Mother return in his final days of living. They spend their last few peaceful moments together, and then the Father is gone; leaving behind those special boxing gloves (once owned by Manny Paqcuiao) to his son. He already left a beautifully written poem for the wife. (Remember this occurs all in one month)
• Now... There's a year left to fill.
• The Mother, and Son are left on their own for awhile... After about 3 months later the Mother remarries. Leaving the son to fend for himself, the Step-Father tries to turn the Mother against her son in the next 4 months; in which he almost succeeds. (But eventually fails) He thought the son kept boxing because he wanted to kill him, but that plan was soon decimated. 
• In a period of a month; the Mother, and Son discover why he is still boxing. His reasoning is because it helps him feel close to the Father that he lost those months back, and that's pretty sweet right? 
• In the last 4 months... The new family is able to sort through all those absurd obsessions, and begin to live happily ever after; while the son continues the boxing. 
• This completes the 3 year period of the story... If you couldn't tell :)

 I think that is pretty good start to my story, and I feel like I appropriately mapped out all the important events in the story. I think all the events will correlate with each other because I believe I strategically mapped them out, and I have the math to prove that! I chose to break things up in months because my story take place over a long period of time, so I figured months would be the best way to go. I have definitely decided that it will take place in about 3 years because I think that is a good period of time to build up the suspense, and all the emotional effects I'm going for.

None of these time periods are definitely set in stone; which means they can be changed, rearranged, and fixed to make the story flow more smoothly if necessary. I think the fluidity of my events are pretty self explanatory, but if you feel that it doesn't make sense that let me know! I would like to think of my story as one of Shakespeare's poem, or short stories, or maybe even one of his tragedies; because of the sadness it will bring. It could also be a comedy because it has those happy moments as well... I'm comparing it to Shakespeare simply to say that it will have fluidity, and it will possibly get to your emotions! Remember this is just the blog, so I'm not entirely sure of all the exact details of every aspect of the story yet. Here's to another blog... Enjoy!

Day Thirteen

I don't think there was a clear moral, or message to the Mirror of Matsuyama. There was really no lesson to be learned either. Well... Since it was written in the Japanese culture I think if I had to choose a message; it would be to obey your parents (especially the men.) In the story it stressed obeying parents, and being very good AT ALL TIMES. I mean you know the Japanese (No stereotyping), but they're very strict people right? I think you get the point about the moral. Another message would be that sometimes you have to go through pain to get the good things in life; make sense? I actually like that message because the story had a happy ending... Just like all fairy tales!

I think those type of messages are key to teach kids at their age because it something they should learn. At the same time there is conflict on trying to teach them because everyone has to learn things on their own. I would prefer that they wouldn't have to learn things the hard, harsh way. Shedding light on these tips, and messages is important as I've mentioned before. If you teach children early on then these messages are more likely to stick with them for the rest of their lives.

I'm keeping those same messages in my story, but I'm easing up on the obeying the parents thing. I still want the moral to be obeying parents, but I don't want it to be too strict. I'm not trying to scare the children; just enforce some good behavior... That's all! I'm definitely keeping the second message as well; going through pain (hardships) to get to that happy place in life. Of course... The story will have a happy ending also. My moral is to never take things for granted, and family can conquer all; I think those are important things for the children to learn. The ultimate message is "Family is the most important thing ever", does that sound too domineering?

I'm starting to see that my story will be an emotional one, and I didn't see that coming. Actually, I kind of like it; I think I'm going to run with this idea. I hope it won't be too emotional for children though. Overall this blog seemed pretty easy when I read the prompt, and I hope I did a good job discussing my messages. Let me know what you think about this blog... Until next time, enjoy!

Day Twelve

The Mirror of Matsuyama would definitely be a fairy tale because it fits all three criterions of being so. There was very little magical characters, wishes, objects, or changes, but the whole mirror ordeal created enough magic to identify with a fairy tale. There was indeed a happy ending in the story, but it didn't start off that way. It began as an emotional, but happy story; as the Father was preparing to go to the capital city for a couple weeks or so. Then the sad part came as the Mother died leaving the Father, and Daughter all alone.

I would assume that it was months before he remarried, but that's the case. Soon after, the Father remarried; thus beginning the dark aspects of the fairy tale. Well... Not dark, but more sadder grey areas of the story. The intimate battle that caused a short rift between the Father, and Daughter; created by the Step-Mother. The battle was short lived only because the family sorted out all the misunderstandings, and began living happily every after as do all fairy tales. The last reason it's a fairy tale is because it's pretty much serious throughout, but it has those moments that make you want to smile, laugh, or cry!

I wanted to go in a different direction with my story, but I've noticed that it still stuck to those criterions of being a fairy tale. I was hoping that it would be a Pourquoi fairy tale, but I've discovered that there is really nothing scientifically based in the story. Although, I could try and explain the scientific reason for sadness; as well as why people die. I decided against that because it didn't seem like the right approach for a children's book, and I didn't want to freak them out. Despite them being in the fourth grade; there is still a lot for them to learn about the real world, and I don't want to be the one responsible to teaching them those harsh realities. 

Now back to the task at hand... My story is definitely a fairy tale simply because the original is a fairy tale, and also it holds the same aspects as the original. Instead of the Mirror being the magical object; the boxing gloves are put in place. The story still follows the same guidelines; EXCEPT the gender roles are reversed. The Mother goes on a trip, and leaves the Father and Son alone for a couple weeks or so. Shortly after the Mother returns only to learn that the Father is dying; this time leaving the Mother, and Son alone to carry on. Like the original the Mother remarries, and the Step-Father is determined to break up the happy home; by deceptive plans. After the plans are sabotaged, or just stopped. The family learns to live happily ever after just like in all, or most fairy tales. Again to reiterate... It's also a fairy tale because it's mostly serious with bits, and pieces to make you smile, laugh, or cry! 

I'm not sure why I've included this picture, but it correlates with my theme; I just like the gloves to be honest. They look cool don't they? I mean who doesn't like Rocky right... The Italian Stallion. Eye of the Tiger... :)

Day Eleven

I actually like this blog here... I think my magical number, well magical numbers will be uno, dos y tres. Check out that spanish? I figured since I was doing the Philippines; I would try and speak some other language. My language of the day is SPANISH, but back to the subject. I will be using the numbers 1, 2, and 3. I chose these numbers because they are quite simple, but can be used as a very concrete subject matter. I didn't really want to choose numbers that were too big because I wouldn't be able to explain them well enough.

I have specific reasons for choosing my numbers, as I've said numerous times. Now let me explain... I chose el numero uno because it's a great number, and their is only one Son in my story. I also chose it because it's the number of chances it took for the Father, and Son to bond before his death. Choosing one as an important number was really a no brainer because it's just that great of a number, as I've mentioned before. Now, on to the number two; el numero dos! The number two is important because boxing gloves come in a pair; which includes two right? If you remember... The boxing gloves are the center theme of my story because it is the thing that helps the Father, and Son bond that ONE last time... Speaking of ONE, that is another reason for using the number one.

In this third paragraph... I hope you can tell what I'm leading up to with mentioning the THIRD paragraph right? Indeed, I'm incorporating the number 3 also; simply because it's a family of three. I think it will also be the number of weeks, or months that the Mother will be gone before returning to her family. It will also be the number of paragraphs in this blog today... Well I'm thinking of more things to write, so I might add another paragraph or so. I think the last paragraph will be in spanish, or not! I thought I could do it, but I guess not; as to seeing that I'm in spanish 3... I think I guessed wrong :( Again there goes that number THREE. I think these numbers will be very important to my story, and I hope that I have explained my reasoning very well. Tell me if you agree...

Adiós mis amigos... Leave comments, and let me know if you think this blog is susceptible for ideas in my story. Gracias :) Below... I have also included a picture of the three stooges just to stress the numbers 1-3 because they were always together; even when they were apart. Get the picture now?

Day Ten

I think so far this experience has been pretty fun, although I didn't expect to do this well on the blogs. I've never really been into blogging, but I guess everybody thinks I'm good at it. I'm not really sure why, but I have a knack for writing. I secretly dreamed of being a journalist in my younger years, and it's always been in the back of my mind. I must admit though; I have truly enjoyed writing these blogs, and they really do help with the writing of my story. 

I'm pretty much caught up with everything, and the blogs we had to do. I wasn't sure how I was going to manage at first, but I pulled through :) I think this has helped me rediscover my secret love of writing, and it has made me think about the book I dream of writing (and publishing.) I thought I was good... Well not to be cocky, but a great writer. Doing these blogs helped me realize that others think very highly of my writing, and I started to gain a whole new confidence in my writing abilities. 

I think it's important to comment because I'm sure that everybody is worried about what they write, how they write it, and the way they present it. Even though people despise all the comments that people write, I think they still value it deep down because of their own insecurity inside. Well... Maybe everyone isn't insecure about what they write, but then again even the most confident person needs to hear others critique their work. I mean all great artists have had others critique their best work, but that didn't slow them down. It gave them that sense of tenacity to keep going, and doing what they felt was right. I think you get the point of how important commenting is right? 

In all these blogs, I've have composed the basic elements of my story. I don't want to discuss each day personally, but only make a reference to each. In the earlier days, I started off discussing the original story; along with reasons for choosing it. I developed the setting (plot), characters, mythical (fantasy) creatures; among other things. I think this pretty much sums up the previous blogs... And such things :)

Day Nine

There were no mythical creatures in the original story, well other than the Mother's spirit after she died. Well actually I would say the mirror was the mythical creature because it was the holder of the Mother's spirit. But is that enough to count it as a fantasy creature? I'm not really sure, but I want to bring a fantasy creature into my story. I like having the spirit of a dying loved one becoming the mythical (fantasy) creature because it makes the story better. I think that's the best choice because I think the story should include a fantasy.

I don't want too many fantasy creatures in the story, so I'll only include one. Just like the original folktale, I'm going to use the object closest to the dying loved one, and the son as the holder of the mythical creature. Make sense so far? Well... In the original story the young daughter believed that her Mother's spirit was still in the Mirror (after she died), so she kept it as a representation of her. In that sense the mirror harboring the spirit became the fantasy creature.

In my story I think the boxing gloves will be that fantasy creature, but in a more complex way. Similar to the spirit in the mirror in the original folktale. The Father's spirit will be kept in the boxing gloves that the son will receive after his death. I think that is the perfect way to incorporate a fantasy creature in my story!

Day Eight

I chose this picture because it focuses on the main point of my story, and I really just liked it very much. I'm not really sure if the word is even translated correctly, but I think you can still get the point of the whole picture thing. I think this picture inspires me because... I would have to say that family is pretty important to me. That's my thing, and I want to stress that to the kids out there. Again, to reiterate family and relationships are the theme (main idea) of my story!

Although my pictures has words; it still has symbols on top which is basically the same thing (I believe.) I'm not totally sure if the words are translated correctly or not, but it looked good to me. Back to the point, I think this picture says a lot more than I could actually say about my story. I can't really describe it, but only by saying "Family is the key to success in life." I like how it even says "Respect for Ones Parents is the highest duty of civil life", I think is true in a way, and it even ties into my story a little bit. I can't wait to see how I use this in the story.

I couldn't decide which picture to use, so I'm going to once again be an overachiever. I chose this picture because another main part of my story is the whole boxing theme I'm incorporating. I like this picture because of the tint of the picture actually, it's not normally what you see when thinking of boxing gloves. It almost gives the picture a mysterious look, and I love how there's a glow around the gloves as well. It makes the boxing gloves pop out at you, and it makes it look more interesting. I think honestly I was drawn to this picture because the boxing gloves just look absolutely cool... Being honest I just like the picture :) I think the most important reason I chose to use the gloves for inspiration is because it symbolizes the bond between the Father, and the Son (the bond they always had, but never realized was there.)

Day Seven

I have three main characters in my story... Although one of them DIE, but not in a brutal way! After the Father dies; then a Step-Father comes in. I think the son, and the father should look alike; just because I'm trying to stress the whole "Father/Son relationship" to shine that special light on men in our world. My whole game plan is to show that there are good men, and young male men that are truly doing good in the world. The Step-Father is the antagonist character because he is trying to come between the Mother, and her Son.

It would only make sense if the Mother would look very pretty, and somewhat mean at the same time. I don't want her to be scary, but I think she should be strong. The Father, and Son will definitely share similar characteristics because they are basically composed (in my story) to be one in the same. They will never know these things until they need each other the most (in the time of the Father's death) I think the Step-Father should be quite scary, and ABSOLUTELY MEANNNNNNN. Well... Not really, just pretty mean looking :)

Main Character Profiles:
Introducing the Main Characters of my new original story!
First up is.... The Family

The Father (Soon to be named later)

• Physical Traits: Brown-skinned (tan/orangish), tall, strongly built, Six foot possibly, Short cut hair, brown eyes, beard/goatee (neatly shaped), great posture, most certainly polite, only rude when necessary (in a calm way), cool/calm/collected.
• Personal History: Very well educated (College graduate), Christian, great relationship with family, very talkative kid, took boxing lessons, Professional Boxing trainer (working with Manny Pacquiao/ other big names), married, no weird habits, in great shape.
• Inner Person Traits: Nice, kind, loving, tough when necessary, tenacious, persistent, mellow, dreams of a better relationship with his son, fears leaving his family behind, VERY VERY VERY  funny, no attitudes.

The Son (Also soon to be named later)

• Physical Traits: Similarly built like his Father, except he is about 5 foot or so, has longer hair, hazel-brownish-greenish eyes (changes at times), no facial hair, great posture, polite, nervous/hyper.
• Personal History: Junior (in high school), Christian, relationship with family needs work, TALKATIVE, interested in taking boxing lessons, single, no weird habits, in shape.
• Inner Person Traits: Kind, loving, touch when necessary, tenacious like his father, angry, dreams of becoming a boxer, fears losing his Mother.

The Mother (Also, also soon to be named later)

• Physical Traits: Pretty, 5 foot, long hair (down her back), always wearing it up, greenish eyes, great posture/manners, hothead.
• Personal History: College Graduate, Christian, Agent (Internationally known), wonderful relationship with everyone, Married, no weird habits, in great shape.
• Inner Person Traits: Similar to both Father, and Son. Except a little meaner.

Then the antagonist character....

The Step-Father (I think you get the point of the name thing by now)

• Physical Traits: Around 7 feet or so, spiky hair, blackish-brown eyes, strongly built, clean shaven, rude, mean, angry ALL THE TIME.
• Personal History: High School graduate, Catholic, no specific profession, horrible personal skills, Married to the Mother (after the Father died), very weird person, in great shape also.
• Inner Person Traits: Mean, rude, not much else to say, except in the end he turns around and becomes loving. 

Day Six

Languages for the Philippines is a tough one because there are a lot of different languages being used there. The main language used to be Spanish, but now there are so many other languages being taught in the schools; among other places also. I have a lot of options to choose from, and it's going to be a tough decision to make. The language is another important component to writing a great story. I'm not really sure which one to choose.

I'm not sure on which words to actually use in the story... I think I'll probably translate those simple words like hello, goodbye, and things like that. I think starting off with the simple words like that would be a good start. I have decided that the language I'm going to write it in is Cebuano, and I think it's a very interesting language. I did research on it, and I really liked it! I also think that I'm going to use a mixture of Cebuano, and English, or some other language being used in the Philippines. I think it would be cool to mixture languages, but not too many; only those that flow, and fit together succinctly. I think I'm going to use the combination of English, Cebuano, Spanish, and Tagalog... But now I have to find a correct translation for all the necessary words in the story! I have included a picture above just to show how many different languages are spoken in the Philippines... :)

Translations:
Cebuano
Hello- "Komosta" or "Hoy"
Dad/Daddy- "Tatay" or "Papa"
Mother- "Inahan" or "Nanay"
Mother In Law- "Ugangang babaye"
Son- "Anak nga lalaki"
Normal (American) English words also... 
Hello
Goodbye
Dad/Mother
Good Morning/Good Night
Spanish
Hello- "Hola"
Goodbye- "Adios"
Dad- "Padre"
Mother- "Madre"
Good Morning- "Buenos Días"
Good Night- "Buenas Noches"
Son- "Hijo"

Cebuano/English Translation
Spanish/English Translation
Translations

Day Five

Names... Names... Names... In the original story there were no names, and each character was referred to by "Father"; "Mother"; "Daughter", etc. I feel in my story that there's a necessity to give the characters name. I've done some research on Filipino names, and I like what I've seen so far. I definitely like the Filipino names; although some of them are hard to pronounce, but they still sound pretty cool. I figured since the Philippines are so closely related to countries like the United States, Asia; that I could also pull names from there.

To quote Shakespeare "What is in a name" IDENTITY... IDENTITY... IDENTITY. I believe the most important thing is the Identity a name gives a person. I think that's why it's one of the most important components to the story. I'm not sure if I wanted to just translate "Father, Mother, Daughter" into various names, or if that was even possible. All I know is... I want some great names for each of my characters, because you can't have a great story without great character names. Right?

Boy names:
Benjie- "Son of my right" (Philppines.)
Bayani- "The hero" (Philippines.)
Igme- "Strong" (Philippines.)
David- (American.)
Francisco- (Spanish.)

Father names:
Datu- "Chief" (Philippines.)
I'm not really sure what other names to give the Father, but I think this is a pretty good start.

Mother names:
Diwata- "Goddess" (Philippines.)
Dalisay- "Pure" (Philippines.)
I like these names because they fit the type of mother that I will have in my story!

I'm not entirely sure which names to use in the story, but I like the ones I've picked out so far. Tell me what you think? I think maybe I should try and use some American names too; as well as Spanish/Asian names too. I guess I have a lot to think about when picking these names out. Well you'll have to wait until I pick those names... Even I'm not sure yet :)

Filipino Names

Day Four

My story will more than likely take place in the capital city of the Philippines, which is Manila. I'm not clear if this is the distinct capital of the Philippines because there is said to be a lot of various capitals out there. The city I'm choosing is Manila because it seems like a generally nice city to capture a nice children's book in! I think a city like this will get the urbanite image, yet peaceful setting I'm trying to accomplish in this book. It seems like a place a person would really want to go to.

I haven't decided on names for the characters as to seeing that in the original story; the characters have no names (they go by Father, Mother, and Daughter.) All I know is I want to use really cool names, and bring a lot of cool new aspects to my story. Although I'm not totally sure on every single detail of the story yet; I think it's coming along pretty well. Since I'm bringing boxing into the story, I decided to make the boxing gloves formerly owned by the famous Manny Pacquiao (since he is from the Philippines.) I think since the Philippines are close to the United States that the Mother will go on a business trip to the states (To California, or something business related.) She will stay there for a long period of time while the Father, and Son are back home in Manila bonding. After the Mother comes back, I think that would be the perfect time for the Father to get sick. Then, he will reveal his life before his family; telling of his adventures of being the trainer of Pacquiao. Thus, the boxing gloves come into play! I like these nice sparkly gloves here :)

Most of the story (dialogue, etc.) will take place in the day time, except for when the Father dies; I want that to take place during the night for a more dramatic effect. Night time is always more dramatic than the day time simply because it's night, and no one really does anything in the day! I'm using this picture so the reader can get the feel for the whole night time theme, but the story won't take place in this particular area. The year hasn't been decided yet, but more than likely something close to our century. I want my story to be appealing to people.

The weather will be sunny, and tropically hot ALL THE TIME. Simply because as mentioned before, we're talking about the Philippines. I'm sure I don't need to remind anything of the temperatures there, but in case you were wondering; it looks something like this. Beautiful scenery isn't it? It makes me want to learn how to swim :) Hmm.. Maybe not! But it still looks great, and quite enjoyable. During the dramatic night time, there will be storms brewing in the area; showcasing very dark aspects of the Philippines (But not too scary... Don't worry.)

I think all bringing all these aspects together will create the perfect scenery, and great setting for the story. Almost forgot, I think the family will live in a wealthy mansion like this...

I believe this a good start to a good story, and setting :) I'm planning on trying to incorporate this little creature also... Isn't it just adorable. Maybe I could use it for the family pet or something unique?

Simply the cutest thing ever :)

Day Three

The Philippines... 

Philippines are similar to Americans in a lot of things they do, but they also have the spanish and asian influence on them. 

Food: 
afritada, asado, chorizo, empanadas, mani (roasted peanuts), paksiw (fish or pork, cooked in vinegar and water with some spices like garlic and pepper), pan de sal (bread rolls), pescado (fried or grilled fish), sisig, torta (omelette), kare-kare (ox-tail stew), kilawen, pinakbet (vegetable stew), pinapaitan, and sinigang (tamarind soup with a variety of pork, fish or prawns). Some delicacies eaten by some Filipinos but may seem unappetizing to the Western palate include balut (boiled egg with a fertilized duckling inside), longanisa (sweet sausage) and dinuguan (soup made from pork blood).

Popular snacks and desserts such as chicharon (deep fried pork or chicken skin), halo-halo(crushed ice with evaporated milk, flan, and sliced tropical fruits), puto (white rice cakes), bibingka(rice cake with butter or margarine and salted eggs), ensaymada (sweet roll with grated cheese on top), polvoron (powder candy) and tsokolate (chocolate) are usually eaten outside the three main meals. Popular Philippine beverages include San Miguel Beer, Tanduay Rhum Masters, lambanogand tuba. I think the food here sounds pretty tasty :)

Religion: 

Western-Christianity, Eastern-Islamic, Hinduism, Buddhism, Catholic, and Muslim. Philippines consist of all types of religious backgrounds.

Mythology:

They believe in Gods/Goddesses, such as "Araw" (Sun); "Buwan" (Moon.) They are also superstitious (believing in the placebo effect.)

Location:

The Philippines are made up of around 7,100 islands, and it southwest of Asia!

Climate:

Tropical marine temperatures (rainy seasons/dry seasons.) 

Flora and Fauna:

Hibiscus flowers are common in the Philippines, and I found the most adorable animal :) It's a Tarsier! (Pictured below), it's derived from the genus tarsius. 

Holidays:

They celebrate most of the same holidays as we do in America, with the exception of Araw ng Kagitingan (Day of Valour), Rizal Day. 

I really want to embrace, and bring in the whole sports aspect into my story. I'm pretty much into sports, so I want my story to move toward that. Since the Philippines are big on sports, and is typically an urban place. I chose a sport that I always wanted to do, which was boxing. I think that is a great sport to use since I switched genders for my main character! 

I'm really happy that I picked this culture, there are unlimited amounts of things I can put into my story. I'm not too sure how to bring all these details together into one perfect story. I didn't realize that the Philippines had a direct relation with the Japanese through their Asian Persuasion (influence.) Below I've listed websites to help you better understand each aspect of what the original story is about, and how I'm planning to change the story; while putting some taste of the Philippines in it! I almost forgot about the important thing; although I won't have music in my story. I still thought I should discuss it, the Philippines listen to all various types of music (Including folk, rock, and hip hop.)

Philippines Culture

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