Monday, October 18, 2010

Day Seven

I have three main characters in my story... Although one of them DIE, but not in a brutal way! After the Father dies; then a Step-Father comes in. I think the son, and the father should look alike; just because I'm trying to stress the whole "Father/Son relationship" to shine that special light on men in our world. My whole game plan is to show that there are good men, and young male men that are truly doing good in the world. The Step-Father is the antagonist character because he is trying to come between the Mother, and her Son.

It would only make sense if the Mother would look very pretty, and somewhat mean at the same time. I don't want her to be scary, but I think she should be strong. The Father, and Son will definitely share similar characteristics because they are basically composed (in my story) to be one in the same. They will never know these things until they need each other the most (in the time of the Father's death) I think the Step-Father should be quite scary, and ABSOLUTELY MEANNNNNNN. Well... Not really, just pretty mean looking :)

Main Character Profiles:
Introducing the Main Characters of my new original story!
First up is.... The Family

The Father (Soon to be named later)
  • Physical Traits: Brown-skinned (tan/orangish), tall, strongly built, Six foot possibly, Short cut hair, brown eyes, beard/goatee (neatly shaped), great posture, most certainly polite, only rude when necessary (in a calm way), cool/calm/collected.
  • Personal History: Very well educated (College graduate), Christian, great relationship with family, very talkative kid, took boxing lessons, Professional Boxing trainer (working with Manny Pacquiao/ other big names), married, no weird habits, in great shape.
  • Inner Person Traits: Nice, kind, loving, tough when necessary, tenacious, persistent, mellow, dreams of a better relationship with his son, fears leaving his family behind, VERY VERY VERY  funny, no attitudes.
The Son (Also soon to be named later)
  • Physical Traits: Similarly built like his Father, except he is about 5 foot or so, has longer hair, hazel-brownish-greenish eyes (changes at times), no facial hair, great posture, polite, nervous/hyper.
  • Personal History: Junior (in high school), Christian, relationship with family needs work, TALKATIVE, interested in taking boxing lessons, single, no weird habits, in shape.
  • Inner Person Traits: Kind, loving, touch when necessary, tenacious like his father, angry, dreams of becoming a boxer, fears losing his Mother.
The Mother (Also, also soon to be named later)
  • Physical Traits: Pretty, 5 foot, long hair (down her back), always wearing it up, greenish eyes, great posture/manners, hothead.
  • Personal History: College Graduate, Christian, Agent (Internationally known), wonderful relationship with everyone, Married, no weird habits, in great shape.
  • Inner Person Traits: Similar to both Father, and Son. Except a little meaner.
Then the antagonist character....

The Step-Father (I think you get the point of the name thing by now)

  • Physical Traits: Around 7 feet or so, spiky hair, blackish-brown eyes, strongly built, clean shaven, rude, mean, angry ALL THE TIME.
  • Personal History: High School graduate, Catholic, no specific profession, horrible personal skills, Married to the Mother (after the Father died), very weird person, in great shape also.
  • Inner Person Traits: Mean, rude, not much else to say, except in the end he turns around and becomes loving. 




8 comments:

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  2. It is scary how awesome you are doing with this blogs. Very impressive. I might be using your blog as an exemplar when sharing with other teachers this year.

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  4. Thanks.. At first I wasn't sure how to go about each blog, but I wasn't sure that I would do a good job. I'm really not into the whole blogging thing, but I'm going to try and do good on each blog!

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  5. Never doubt yourself! Well, unless you're a dog about to fight a bear...then I'd doubt myself hehe...

    I'm not into blogging either. I just like commenting on other's blogs and expressing my opinion. Somehow I'm being impressive with my blogs/comments...

    Eh...there are some things you don'y enjoy that you excel at, eh?

    Have a nice...day.

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  6. I like commenting too sometimes, and true there are some things I don't really like but I'm still good at... Not really sure how that works out, but it always happens!

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